13 years ago
animal_lover13
It's pretty good. I like how it's like the season, and then your emotions. But it doesn't flow very well, and to me, some of it doesn't make sense. And it's somewhat repeating. However, it's your poetry, and it shouldn't make sense to anyone else but you. If you like, then well done, you don't need any of us telling you what we think about it, when it's your poem.
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