13 years ago
Anonymous

what do you think of this poem?

Here comes fall, and I'm falling for you. It comes every year, but it has never felt like this before. It feels like a start of something new. Here comes fall, and I'm falling for you. The loneliness shall be no more, because now your here to keep me warm. All my love, into your heart ill pour. I will never feel like this, I could have sworn. Please let this be a start of something new. Here comes fall, and im falling for you.
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13 years ago
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its good. the only thing i didnt like was the start of something new. sorry it just sounded like a joke and high school musical. but that is very pretty and creative. good luck!
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13 years ago
animal_lover13
It's pretty good. I like how it's like the season, and then your emotions. But it doesn't flow very well, and to me, some of it doesn't make sense. And it's somewhat repeating. However, it's your poetry, and it shouldn't make sense to anyone else but you. If you like, then well done, you don't need any of us telling you what we think about it, when it's your poem.
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13 years ago
Cp3
gay
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