13 years ago
xxdarkxemoxx

What do you think of my story so far?

This is the first chapter: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Stella_Grrl/332491/ And this is the second chapter: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Stella_Grrl/333993/
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13 years ago
Jamieeee sunshine
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Wow! That's so good. How much more have you wrote on it? It's really interesting. You are a very talented writer! Keep it up. Jamie xx p.s, thank you for your lovely comment on my question, too.
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13 years ago
Anonymous
i like it so far. i only got 1/2 way through the first chapter though cuz i gotta go. my only concern: some parts are confusing, like 'Square jawed and round.' I dont get that. I'm starring so I can read later :]
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13 years ago
Mrs.EDward Cullen
hay i loved your story so far i think you should finish it and publish it. I think it would sell great!
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13 years ago
jen
kinda loooong and a bit boring....
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