Help and Rate My D.D. Deck (Different Dimension)?

My deck has 42 cards altogether Monsters (20) Breaker The Magical Warrior x1 Caius The Shadow Monarch x2 Cyber Dragon x1 D.D. Assailant x2 D.D. Survivor x3 D.D. Warrior Lady x2 Elemental Hero Wildheart x2 Exiled Force x2 Golden Homunculus x2 Marshmallon x1 Mobius The Frost Monarch x2 Spells (11) Brain Control x1 D.D.R Different Dimension Reincarnation x2 Dimensional Fissure x2 Fissure x2 Lighting Vortex x1 Mystical Space Typhoon x1 Reinforcement of The Army x1 Swords Of Reavealing Lights x1 Traps (11) Bottomless Trap Hole x2 D.D. Dynamite x2 Macro Cosmos x2 Magic Cylinder x1 Sakuretsu Armor x3 Torrential Tribute x1 My Side Deck (15) Banisher Of The Radiance x3 Chaos Sorcerer x1 D.D. Warrior x1 Jinzo x1 Card Destruction x1 Enemy Controller x1 Nobleman Of Crossout x2 Scapegoat x1 Karma Cut x2 Return From The Different Dimension x1 Trap Dustshoot x1